Now our first/final embrace.
Flung through fantastic retinue
for years, felt frequencies,
flew thru flowing waters (what a rush) –
finding precursors.
Farewell antenna &
fussiness of task.
Undressed I blush,
fast (f)lash on your cheek.
In this
splendid
moment
I will
be
free.
Written for Quadrille #40 – De Jackson (WhimsyGizmo) has asked us to be ‘free’ at Dverse – the poet’s pub. The Grand Finale of the space probe Cassini is here
Peter Frankis writes 
Really good. Love vac the inventiveness and the flow of energy.
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I’d like to say farewell to the fussiness of task, but my demise won’t be half so spectacular as Cassini’s. Glad you provided a link for further insight into you inspiration, cool website- cool poem!
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Love all that “f” alliteration here. So much. Great piece.
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Love how this flows. Nice write.
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Thanks –
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I liked the lines “Farewell antenna &
fussiness of task”
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Love it… the liberation of falling with someone. The (f)lash was a nice detail
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I like the alliteration and the juxtaposition of ‘ first/final embrace’ – the summing up of a relationship. I especially like the idea of a ‘Farewell antenna’, which would save us all from a ‘fussiness of task’ and the sweet lines:
‘Undressed I blush,
fast (f)lash on your cheek’.
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Thanks Kim, glad you liked it.
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… not about a person at all but of course it could be…
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The first stanzas are a nice wind-up for that delicious (unexpected) last stanza. It felt like a release, a rush (as you said).
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