Once upon and
once again –
twice more until
done down and
stay down this time.
From another another cry
cornered to my corner
rain down the head piece
rain down the wallpaper
reciprocal to inter-tidal
pooled in pools.
Now some lunk with a lug
hawks the carpet like a wave.
Finally wrestled the doors shut
the floor is ours a moment
stretched an hour.
Here and quietly
here we held
each one singly,
one each time
and back again
and back.
Image: from my favourite place in Sydney, the Domain Parking Station travelator. A bit of abstraction for Dverse on Tuesday where Lillian has asked us to use that old stock phrase… in new ways. And here’s the final duel from Once upon a time in the West (Bronson, Fonda, Cardinale, Sergio Leone, and Ennio Morricone)
Peter Frankis writes 
very interesting and melodic play of words
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from once and once to another to rain down rain down to finally to single, one and back again.
Interesting word play indeed.
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This is such a clever play with words… love the way they dance round and round…
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Thanks Bjorn.
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Very much like a piece of abstract art!
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Thanks Bev, glad you liked.
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Nice sound in these repetitions.
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Me too, the four-dimensional geometric variations , Peter. For me, it transmits a feeling of being trapped in a storm, and then a tranquil passing, warm memories. Great image, although it brings back my own memories of being lost in strange places.
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Cool one 👍👍
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