
‘It started the day we moved in,’ the woman says.
‘We wake at 3 or 4 in the morning to explosions and banging,’ the man says. ‘The bedroom is thick with smoke and flames are curling up the doorframe.’
Rather than cowering or escaping through an upstairs window, the man and the woman grab blankets and start the fight of their lives. They hoist buckets from the en-suite, move furniture about and eventually manage to push the fire back from the door. Then back over the landing. Step by step they fight until the fire is confined to one room, then just a teeny corner.
All this takes hours and by then they are filthy and panting like animals.
‘I haven’t the strength to finish it,’ the man says lowering his flail to the floor.
‘I can’t lift another bucket,’ says the woman.
So they stop.
‘We’ll finish it tomorrow I promise,’ the man says gently brushing an ember from her sooty hair. ‘When we’re refreshed.’
‘I can barely stand,’ the woman says looking at the man’s scorched pyjamas, his ashy eyebrows.
Leaning together, they stumble back to the bedroom and collapse into an exhausted sleep.
Only to wake at the same time next morning, the fire renewed, as dangerous as ever.
‘Sometimes I want to stop, to just pack up and leave,’ the woman says. ‘But then what would he do?’
‘I couldn’t fight it without her,’ the man says. ‘I’d be lost.’
They understand this is what it takes to live in the middle of a country, down this kind of street, in a house afire.
Image: Castle rock, Flinders Island. A piece inspired by Lydia Davis’ In a House Besieged from her Collected Stories and written for Dverse where Sanaa asks us write an erotic poem (yes, I know it’s a little indirect 🙂)
Here’s Melbourne funksters The Bamboos with I got burned
And for no reason other than it’s beautiful and it’s playing now, here’s Kali Malone with The Sacrificial Code.
They are lucky to live with a fire that never goes out, and they’re encouraging it together. Like pruning a plant; cut it back, it comes back stronger 🙂
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exactly
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Very clever take on the prompt. I decided to let this one fly…
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This is quite an interesting metaphor, and take on the prompt.
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This is gorgeously rendered! ❤️ It took me a few seconds to recognize the fire 😀 ( I like what you did there) that exists between the two characters in the story. You have proved that erotica needs not be direct! Thank you so much for writing to my prompt! ❤️
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Thanks so much, and for a great prompt.
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You’re most welcome! 🙂
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I love the story and their relationship! Keep the fire burning, I say!
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What a wonderful story… and fire like that will either consume them in the end or one of them has to leave… I think it’s hard for it to ever cool off.
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Very witty and creative take on the prompt! Whew! They’ve got some fiery passion going on there! 🔥🔥🔥 Smokin’!
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Thanks so much. Glad you liked.
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