that ending (2)

rusty comet

Now our first/final embrace.
Flung through fantastic retinue
for years, felt frequencies,
flew thru flowing waters (what a rush) –
finding precursors.

Farewell antenna &
fussiness of task.
Undressed I blush,
fast (f)lash on your cheek.

In this
splendid
moment
I will
be
free.

 


Written for Quadrille #40 – De Jackson (WhimsyGizmo) has asked us to be ‘free’ at Dverse – the poet’s pub. The Grand Finale of the space probe Cassini is here

11 thoughts on “that ending (2)

  1. I like the alliteration and the juxtaposition of ‘ first/final embrace’ – the summing up of a relationship. I especially like the idea of a ‘Farewell antenna’, which would save us all from a ‘fussiness of task’ and the sweet lines:
    ‘Undressed I blush,
    fast (f)lash on your cheek’.

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