a tanka sonnet — August 2

as sun leaves the wall
spider gets busy 
sowing sails and vacancies
scaled to her prey 
in hopper legs and fly husks 

how like this, this is— 
line on line and beauty
bent round purpose 
like a bonsai cypress 
framed by chicken wire 

and how wrapt we are
beguiled by gravity 
stuck, barely able 
to remember the door

Image: A favourite wall in Wollongong, rear of the Bridgestone Tyres outlet, McCabe Park. A bit of play with forms today (apols to any tanka purists, the syllable count doesn’t work either).

And for music this morning, here’s another piece from favourite US soul guitarist Shuggie Otis, Live in Williamsburg (Brooklyn) from 2014 (Youtube).

5 thoughts on “a tanka sonnet — August 2

  1. strange to see the green coming out of a vertical wall. I tried imagining it as flat, like a road, where the sprouts work their way through. Wondering if that makes me a flat-earther? Life will find a way. Nice summery tune (for MI.) Haven’t seen you posting new tanka. On hiatus?

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