
the crescent moon prows the rolling clouds like ... ... a ship ... ... in a storm ... (tired simile founders in intermittent light)
Image: Moon through Clouds (detail) c/- Shinyphoto.co.uk.
Some days are just like that, some poems too… and moons.
And for music this morning, here’s some chill West African music: Ali Farka Touré collaborating with Ry Cooder on their 1994 album Talking Timbuktu (Youtube)
That intermittent light brought up an image of a lighthouse in a storm… so your tanka worked at different levels for me!
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I’m glad it worked for you. P
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Like a god’s eye watching.
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